tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26480099.post2706300271352470054..comments2024-01-02T07:35:52.885-05:00Comments on Seen Reading: Spadina streetcar, annoyed by a loose strand of hair.Julie Wilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07812509515495412497noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26480099.post-62564260069918810522007-08-09T19:27:00.000-04:002007-08-09T19:27:00.000-04:00"Invisible Male Cloud God thing". ;)Best of luck w..."Invisible Male Cloud God thing". ;)<BR/><BR/>Best of luck with your submission. Very exciting!<BR/><BR/>And, yes, this is a layered entry. Funny how the writer has the whole picture in mind. There's so little craft here, more omission...<BR/><BR/>Still east?Julie Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07812509515495412497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26480099.post-22325695129465805382007-08-09T14:56:00.000-04:002007-08-09T14:56:00.000-04:00Now Julie, there's a book I could not could not ge...Now Julie, there's a book I could not could not get through even tho several recommended. Too biblical for my taste (Invisible Male Cloud God thing).<BR/>Re your previous question, I have tampered with and workshopped a few of the other stories. But not that particular one, tho it was suggested I drop the last paragraph which was in the submission.<BR/>You say so much in your paragraph of writingWisewebwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15281689872840844191noreply@blogger.com